Comments on: Life

By: Shawn

Shawn — Wed, 02 Jun 2010 07:55:10 +0000

Hirak: really love your comment. You have been really giving me a way to write differently everytime. I have been improving since the time i start till now. Yes i know i have a few grammatical errors, thanks for pointing it out to me.

By: Shawn

Shawn — Wed, 02 Jun 2010 07:51:44 +0000

princess: Thank you very much. Yes who you are.. not what you are. Life has many things and it’s own unique personality that makes us who we are.

By: Hirak

Hirak — Wed, 02 Jun 2010 07:49:57 +0000

A good write, and inspiring. Few grammatical errors you can edit. There’s nothing I can criticize here, although you cannot hardly touch life in such short words, I feel you’ve done justice to the length of the piece and given something to think about.

Life in inconcievable. Can you imagine how incredible it is to breathe, to be able to eat, touch, feel, sense, to be able to do anything, to live? And even when we think that death is easier sometimes, it is still wise to think what we stand to lose, which is everything. Because there is no life after death, or at least not one that we know of. So think not once, not twice but a thousand times.

In “my” words, to conclude, life is the greatest gift of all, treasure it.

By: Princess ?????

Princess ????? — Wed, 02 Jun 2010 07:48:51 +0000

Actually,
Its really not important what you are.
What’s most important is who you are since thats you.
Not him, not her, not me, just you and your own unique personality

By: Shawn

Shawn — Mon, 31 May 2010 14:34:03 +0000

Slayer: Thank you agree with you.

By: Slayer Onnya

Slayer Onnya — Mon, 31 May 2010 13:48:14 +0000

Agree… I think… life is a kind of writing… something that keeps on going on… with many chapters and such ) and it doesn’t stop with every sentence period… it goes on until all the pages are completed with a conclusion